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What had possessed Ruth to commit herself to writing after the compact we had made to have no further communication with each other! It was she who had suggested that we become as strangers, and I could only read in this sudden appeal and the haste with which I was being whirled toward her some dread calamity. Nor was my anxiety lessened by the fact that I was hopelessly in love with her. Yes, hopelessly, I speak advisedly, because she was another man's wife, and while that man lived she would be true to him although he deserved it less than anyone I knew.
To think that a few short months ago Ruth and I had been engaged! If I had had my way we should have been married at once without any fuss, and so should have avoided the trouble that befell us, but Ruth wanted a trousseau and a big wedding, so like many a better man before me I humored her to the extent of promising to wait another month.
Did I say a month? Six have passed and I am waiting yet, while Ruth has had her wish, for her wedding was a sort of nine days' wonder, Philip Darwin having long been voted by his feminine friends as "the type of man who never marries, my dear."
In letting my bitterness run away with my discretion, I have begun my story at the wrong end, giving a false impression of the facts of the case, for I never once dreamed of blaming or censuring Ruth for the misery that her decision cost me.
Two weeks before the date set for my wedding, Ruth came to me with tears in her eyes, and laying the ring I had given her upon the table begged me if I loved her never to see her again. I was decidedly taken aback, but I retained sufficient presence of mind to laugh at her and to request her not to be absurd. She was not to be diverted, however, nor would she say anything beyond a reiteration of the fact that if I loved her I would be willing to obey her without questioning her motives.
All of which was folly to my way of thinking, and being very much in love, I refused to be disposed of in any such high-handed fashion, particularly as I felt that as her affianced husband I was entitled to some say in the proceedings. Never in the course of my life before had I been called upon to plead so skillfully, and plead I did; for it was more than my life I was fighting for, it was our love, our happiness, our future home. Gradually I wore down her defenses and finally she sobbed out the whole pitiful story.
Her brother, her adored and darling Dick, whom she had mothered almost from the time that he was born, had fallen of late under the influence of Philip Darwin, director of the bank of which her father was president and Dick assistant cashier. Handsome, spoiled, the boy had been flattered by the attentions of the older man, who explained his interest on the ground that Dick reminded him strongly of what he had been ten years before. Under his tutelage, then, the boy early became a devotee of the twin gods of gambling and of drink.
Two nights before in a questionable gambling den to which Philip Darwin had taken him, Dick, his temper inflamed by the strong liquor he had been drinking, quarreled with his neighbor, accusing him of trying to cheat. The fellow, a big, powerful chap, made for Dick, who pulled out a pistol which Darwin had given him, and fired. His opponent went down like a log, and as the man fell, Darwin extinguished the light. In the confusion that ensued the older man got the boy away to his home, where Dick gathered some things together and with the connivance of his father left for the West.
Of course the affair came out in the papers, I recalled it as Ruth spoke, and the police were on the hunt for the unknown assailant of the dead man. Fortunately for Dick, both he and Darwin attended these places in disguise and a trip West for the scion of a wealthy family was no unusual event, hence his absence from social circles was easily accounted for, and Ruth and her father were merely waiting for the furore to abate before sending for the boy, when Darwin exploded a bomb in their midst.
He had always admired Ruth, he had always wanted to make her his wife. She had spurned his love and he had accepted defeat stoically. But now things were different. Her brother was wanted by the police for murder. The police, to be sure, didn't know it was her brother that they wanted but he, Philip Darwin, was quite willing to supply them with the information unless Ruth agreed to become his bride.
"What was there for me to do, Carlton, but to acquiesce?" she had ended with a sob. "Philip Darwin is an implacable man. And even if Dick eluded the police, think of the disgrace for Daddy and for me. It's terrible enough that he should have killed a man, but that he should become a hunted thing, my little brother--! No, no! I'd rather sacrifice my love than have that happen!"
I remained silent, for I could think of no argument that would suffice to meet the situation, and taking my apparent immobility for acceptance, she continued: "It's a big sacrifice, dear, I know, but you will bear it bravely for my sake, because--because there is more in life than love alone and it's the honor of my name that is at stake."
In the face of her sublime unselfishness I felt that I could do no less than prove myself as noble as she deemed me. I agreed, therefore, to give her up and when she said we had better not meet again I consented dumbly, comprehending the wisdom of her decision even while my heart rebelled against its enforcement.
When she had gone my resentment flared full and strong, but curiously enough not against the one who had been the chief cause of the ruin of my happiness. I felt only pity, a profound and sincere pity, for the misguided boy who had committed the crime. My anger blazed toward that man who by his foolish adoration of his only son had spoiled and indulged the boy to his own undoing. What right had any man to bring up a son in that fashion? How dared his father let him loose upon the world without teaching him the first principles of self-restraint?
It was not Dick but Mr. Trenton who was to blame for the boy's act. Almost from the moment that he could make his wants known the boy had been given to understand that what he wanted was his for the asking. Everyone in the home had to give way before him. He was never crossed and never denied. Small wonder that when he grew to manhood he should expect the world to give as much and more than his father had done, that when he ran across temptation he had no moral strength to resist, and that he became an easy prey to a man of Philip Darwin's type.
Here my thoughts veered abruptly to the man who would soon become Ruth's husband and for a moment I saw red. Ruth, pure, sweet Ruth, married to that vile wretch! I could not endure it.
I had actually grasped my hat and was on the point of hastening to her home to plead with her not to sacrifice herself in so dreadful a manner, even if she never married me, when I paused, for the horrible alternative flashed across my mind. With a groan I returned to my library where the remainder of the night I wrestled with what to me seemed the only solution to the problem, the instant and speedy death of Philip Darwin.
By morning I was saner. There was not much use in jumping out of the frying-pan into the fire, and besides what did I know of Philip Darwin beyond the fact that he had been the one to lead Dick astray? For ought I knew to the contrary he might make Ruth a very good and devoted husband. There were hundreds of cases on record where a man had been reformed and steadied by marriage.
Though all this philosophizing by no means alleviated the pain in my heart, still it helped to allay the fever in my tortured brain, and from that time on I resolutely put Ruth from my mind and plunged into my work in an effort to forget.
Forget! How much had I forgotten in the six months that had passed? Not one single detail had escaped my memory and it all came back with tenfold force for having been thrust out of sight so long. With a groan I buried my head in my hands.
How long I remained thus oblivious to time and space I do not know. The chauffeur's voice brought me back to a realization that we had arrived at our destination. I alighted and as he backed the car down the drive I paused a moment before ascending the steps to try to distinguish something of this home whose mistress Ruth had become.
It was very dark, a dull, cloudy night, and all I beheld was a great black bulk looming before me like some Plutonian monster, harbinger of evil, and the soughing of the wind in the branches of the nearby trees gave me such a feeling of superstitious dread that I raced up the steps and rang the bell as though in fear of my life.
The door was opened for me by Ruth herself, who drew me within, and locked it behind me. Then with a finger on her lip, she led the way in silence to the drawing-room, seeming to breathe only when the door of that room was closed against further intrusion.
"What is it, Ruth?" I asked, more and more alarmed by all this secrecy coming on top of my own foolish fears.
Instead of answering she drew me down beside her on the divan and touched with her fingers my graying temples.
"Did I do that to you, Carlton?" she murmured, brokenly. "Oh, my dear, I wonder you had the courage to forgive me!"
"Ruth!" I cried sharply and at the misery in my voice she slipped to her knees and buried her face in her arms.
"Forgive me," she sobbed. "I should not have let myself go, but sometimes I feel I must go mad, alone night after night in this great silent house with only that horrible secretary of Phil's for company!"
"Hush," I returned, drawing her to me, but she pushed me from her and raised her head in a startled way.
"Listen!" she whispered, holding up her hand. "I thought I heard someone prowling around."
More to satisfy Ruth and ease her fears, for I had heard no sound, I went to the door and flung it open. But the dimly lighted hall was empty save for the wavering shadows that lost themselves in the gloom of the stairwell. The utter silence and loneliness of the great house gave me an eerie feeling, and I was glad to close the door and return to Ruth.
She had regained command of herself and was once more seated on the divan. As I approached she questioned me with her eyes. With a shake of the head and a reassuring smile, I resumed my place beside her.
"I thought I could stand it," she said, after what seemed an interminable interval, "but you don't know what I have had to put up with. No, Carlton, please!" for I had caught her to me in my desire to shield her from all harm.
"Forgive me," I returned humbly, rising and pacing the long room, "but I can't bear to hear you say such things when I love you so!"
"I know, Carlton. I won't grieve you that way again. It was for another reason that I asked you here."
She was so long, however, in telling me that reason that I had time to study her more closely, and my heart grew ever more bitter as I saw how thin she was and how the lines of suffering had gathered on her white brow and around her sweet, drooping mouth. Verily I cursed the day that Philip Darwin had crossed Ruth's path, and if he had entered the room at that moment I honestly believe I should have killed him.
She must have read my thought for she cried out sharply, "No, no, Carlton, not that!" and when I flushed she added more quietly, "Won't you come and sit beside me, please?"
When I had complied with her request, she lowered her voice until it was the merest thread, at the same time looking around her as if she feared the presence of someone else in the room.
"You know I have a feeling that Mr. Orton, Phil's secretary, is always hanging around listening and spying upon me. Ugh, he makes me shiver with his prominent, near-sighted eyes, his eternal humility and mock grin. He reminds me of Uriah Heep in _David Copperfield_. I suppose I'm foolish, but I've been alone so much of late."
"But, Ruth, I thought your father lived here with you?"
"Yes, he did, but two weeks ago the doctor told him to take a vacation and he has been visiting friends out of town. I expect him home to-morrow or the next day at the latest. Then I shall be all right again."
She clasped her hands in her lap and strove to keep back the tears.
"Ruth, dear," I said, taking her little trembling hands in both my own, "why did you send for me? Surely there is something I can do!"
She smiled faintly as she gently withdrew her hands and reclasped them in her lap. "It was for your sake I sent for you," she said, simply.
"For my sake?" I asked puzzled.
"You'd think that I had caused you enough suffering without adding needlessly to your sorrow," she continued, as if to herself. "Oh, Carlton," turning suddenly toward me, "forgive me, but I did a very foolish thing last night. I was so lonely and dispirited and nervous with hearing Mr. Orton prowling around and seeing him appear suddenly from shadowy corners that I locked myself in my room and poured out my heart to you."
"Ruth, darling!" I murmured.
"It was foolish, Carlton, nay more, it was imprudent, and realizing this last fact I tore up the letter and threw it in my waste basket. I would have done better to have kept it, for to-night about ten-thirty, when I was on the point of retiring, Mr. Orton knocked on my door and said that Phil desired my presence in his study."
"Yes," she answered wearily. "It is only one of the many indignities I have had to endure. So I followed him to the study and there on the table the first thing I laid my eyes on was my letter--all those scraps pasted together on a larger sheet. Think of it, Carlton!"
But I couldn't think. The petty sordidness of it was beyond me. I could only stare at her and speak a name below my breath. Orton was what I said.
"Yes, he had found the letter. He examines my waste basket every day it seems," she continued, bitterly, "in hopes of finding just what he did find this morning. An unfaithful husband is always sure to be suspicious of his wife, and her moral superiority is equally sure to gall him."
"I am not going to tell you what Phil said," she went on presently. "I couldn't, for most of it passed me by. But when he spoke of revenging himself upon you, of ruining you and breaking you, then I decided it was time to act. He told me he was going out, so I sent my maid with the note and instructions to my chauffeur. I had to warn you, to put you on your guard that you might be able to fight any rumors which he may spread. But, Carlton, please promise me that you will keep out of his way. Please, for my sake!"
She clung to me as I shook my head impatiently. "It would only make it harder for me, Carlton!" she pleaded.
"Never mind me, Ruth!" I said almost angrily. "Think of yourself for a few minutes. Why don't you get a divorce or at least a separation? You have more than enough grounds."
"No, no. He would take it out on Dick. Don't you see he has me in his power?"
It was useless to try to influence her, especially as I could well appreciate the justice of her remark. I slightly cursed Philip Darwin for a blackguard, and then turned the conversation into a side channel.
"Ruth, do you think you could get that letter for me?" I asked.
"Because it is a powerful weapon to hold over you if he should ever decide to cast you aside." Seeing that this had no effect upon her, I added--would that I had cut my tongue out ere it had uttered those words! "because he can use it as a weapon against me."
Instantly she was on her feet. "He put it in the drawer of the table in his study. Stay here, dear, while I see if I can get it."
She opened the door of the drawing-room and crossed the hall to the study. The drawing-room occupied about one-third of the lower floor of the main wing and lay to the right of the entrance hall, while the study was its exact counterpart on the left, so that the door of the study was directly opposite the door of the drawing-room which was now open before me.
I saw Ruth try the door of the study and as it yielded to her hand she advanced timidly into the room, leaving the door barely ajar behind her. My view being thus effectually cut off I strained forward in an endeavor to catch the slightest sound, but was only rewarded by the most profound stillness, through which there presently echoed and re-echoed the voice of the old clock in the hall proclaiming the midnight hour. Then, as if that ancient time-piece had been the signal previously agreed upon, there rang through the house from the direction of the study the sharp report of a pistol, followed by silence, absolute, profound!
A moment I remained petrified, then with a bound I gained the study door, my one thought for Ruth. But on the threshold I stood rooted to the spot by the sight that met my eyes!
In the patch of light cast by a small lamp upon the study table, lying back in his chair with a sardonic grin on his face and an ever-widening stain upon his shirt front, was Philip Darwin, while beside him as if turned to stone, stood Ruth with a pistol in her hand!
My cry startled her. Dropping the pistol and flinging out her arms, she laughed hysterically and stumbled toward me. Something in my face, perhaps the horror I could not help revealing, arrested her before she reached me.
"Carlton! Surely you can't think I killed him!" she cried. "It--it would be too monstrous!" And with a fluttering sigh she sank in a heap on the floor.
Tenderly I gathered her limp form in my arms and was on the point of bearing her from the room when suddenly without any warning the study was flooded with light and Philip Darwin's secretary was standing obsequiously before me.
"Shall I telephone for a doctor, Mr. Davies? And for the police?" with a glance at his erstwhile master.
At mention of the police I frowned though I knew of course that their presence was inevitable. But there was no need to bring them buzzing about our ears any sooner than was absolutely necessary.
"A doctor, yes. The police can wait," I said abruptly.
"Just as you say, Mr. Davies," he returned with a leering smile. "I'll call Dr. Haskins."
The narrator of Marion Harvey's The Mystery of the Hidden Room introduces himself in the first chapter with a pipe, a book, and a touch of sarcasm. When his valet Jenkins interrupts his reading, he quips, “Have you come to remind me that it is long past my bed-time?”—a line that establishes a dry, self-aware voice. This narrator, whose name is not given in the excerpts, becomes the reader's proxy, observing events and interacting with the detective Graydon McKelvie. The novel's opening also sets a specific time and place: an October night in a New York library, with the steam heat not yet turned on. These small details ground the mystery in a domestic, urban setting.
The Narrator's Voice and Role
The narrator's personality emerges through his word choices and reactions. He describes Jenkins's face as “attenuated by nature into the semblance of perpetual gloom,” a phrase that blends observation with mild humor. When he receives Ruth's note, he acts immediately, flinging aside his jacket and calling for his hat and coat. This impulsiveness contrasts with the detective McKelvie's measured reasoning. The narrator also admits his own biases: he instinctively distrusts the secretary Orton and finds it hard to believe Lee Darwin is guilty, recalling “the young man's noble countenance.” These subjective impressions color the investigation, reminding readers that the story is filtered through a fallible participant.
McKelvie's Deductive Method
Detective Graydon McKelvie speaks in short, pointed sentences and uses rhetorical questions. He quotes scripture—“'Can there any good thing come out of Nazareth?'”—and makes cryptic remarks like “Ask me that again later.” His reasoning relies on physical evidence: he examines handwriting specimens, noting that Philip Darwin “does not make his capitals with a flourish” and that his R's are straight, leading to a conclusion about the will. He also pays attention to a sachet of Rose Jacqueminot, which he considers significant, though he withholds his full theory. McKelvie's method is methodical but secretive, and he often corrects the narrator's assumptions, as when he says Orton “couldn't possibly have done it” due to timing.
Clues and Their Presentation
The excerpts present several clues: a note, a sachet, a stick-pin, a signet ring, and a secret entrance. The sachet is introduced when the narrator finds it and asks McKelvie's opinion; McKelvie shrugs, saying it “may be important and may not.” This casual treatment contrasts with the narrator's later suspicion. The stick-pin is mentioned as “no proof that he was there at midnight,” highlighting the gap between evidence and certainty. The secret entrance is referenced in chapter titles but not described in the excerpts. Harvey's method is to offer clues through dialogue and brief descriptions, leaving their significance ambiguous. Readers must track these details alongside the narrator, who often jumps to conclusions that McKelvie then refines.
Dialogue as a Vehicle for Suspense
Harvey uses dialogue to advance the plot and reveal character. The exchange between the narrator and McKelvie about Orton's alibi is a good example: the narrator proposes a theory (“He may never have gone out”), and McKelvie counters with logic (“How long do you suppose it takes to lock all those doors?”). The dialogue also conveys tension through interruptions and sharp replies. When the narrator says “I swear I never heard him!” McKelvie responds with a question about Mrs. Darwin's testimony. These back-and-forth arguments mimic the process of deduction and keep the reader engaged. The excerpts show that Harvey favors conversation over lengthy description, letting characters reveal their suspicions and reasoning through speech.
Readers approaching The Mystery of the Hidden Room should attend to the narrator's perspective: he is not omniscient, and his judgments may be unreliable. The detective's terse pronouncements often carry more weight than the narrator's intuitions. The novel's structure, with chapters titled like case notes (“The Note,” “The Shot,” “The Inquest”), suggests a procedural approach. Pay attention to small objects—a sachet, a stick-pin, a signet ring—as they may reappear with new significance. The excerpts offer only a partial view, but they reveal a mystery built on dialogue, physical clues, and the interplay between a skeptical detective and an impressionable narrator.
Reading the editorial notes on Marion Harvey’s sachet and signet ring, I felt that same quiet pleasure of noticing deliberate details—the way a narrator’s wry aside can hold more than a locked door. It reminded me of a little guide I once kept close, In and Out — A Reader’s Guide, whose margins felt like a friend’s handwriting. Some books simply linger that way.
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